Ethical Reflection

I wrote my ethical essay on how it is unethical to continue to test on animals. My first draft was a little short so for the final draft I lengthened it and took out any unnecessary paragraphs and information that did not belong. Also, for my final draft, I fixed some sentences to make them more clear as to what I was talking about. I did some more research for my final draft and added in some extra information to help get my point across even better. The comments that were left on my first draft helped a lot to make my final draft better and I followed all of them to hopefully make a good final draft.